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Reviews for "Base 17 ::03::"

Great Work!

Great Job Captain! The animations come a long way and yay for SFX!
All the voices were great, except for mine.

+10

Cool graphics..

2nd flash anime I've seen since Minushi. Cool graphics, I like how you drew the characters, each of them with their own features.

Will be chasing the plot.

If you were going for an anime feel, you killed it

You hit the anime nail right on the head. The character designs were solid, the animation connected suprisingly well, and the voice acting was clear and professional, if not realistic. I guess the problem here that I picked up on is that with the perfect anime mimic came a mimic of anime's issues as well. The reason I can say this is because I've done the exact same thing, and am trying to fix it now. I just wanted to make that clear so that I don't come across as a hypocrite, I can just spot it easily.

The scenario just doesn't stand out, the story is pretty typical anime fare. There's this cold, emotionless main character who has no personality whatsoever and brings nothing interesting to the story. And the voice actors seemed like they were trying too hard, and everything is pretty one-dimensional. The cold character is cold 24/7. The spunky girl is spunky 24/7. The friends have no other purpose in the story other than to try to cheer up the main character when really, in real life, personality-less people like that are unbearable. Maybe just a touch of realism would help, mix things up a bit, add something new to the anime genre like Samurai Champloo, Dead Leaves or the Boondocks did. Don't worry, I'm dealing with similar issues in my own work, it's all good. Good luck with that, the animation looks great.

Awesome.

Really good. Good thing I went and watched the first 2. You have an amazing story, really good animation, but some of the voice acting I just couldn't take. Audrey sounded like a robot, maybe she's supposed too, but not that much please, it's annoying. And the last scene, it was supposed to be very emotional, but it felt like your actors were afraid to really yell and fight. I'm being way to picky and asking too much of you, it was a very good animation, TV worthy if you ask me. Don't let this die.

cool!

its great just needs work on the graphics