confuzingly kewl
so far ive seen all 3 but it doesnt make much sense. it just tells me what i need to know overall...[im a detailed person i love personal stories and what not] the animation was very good and the plot seems ot be coming along well :3
Hm!
I thought up a witty review while watching your animation, but when I went to type it in the guy below me wrote my thoughts 95% more coherent than I had intended to write them.... What a jerk =)
Keep up the skillz man~
Alright...
Okay if this is simply practice at animation and voice acting, then congratulations your improving greatly. But if this is simply supposed to be another show then I'm sorry, but the cliches are killing it. I write also so I know how hard it is to sound original, but this feels like you traced the outline for generic anime and then ruined its opportunities to escape that outline.
I have a feeling that this could be really good, but feel free to be original, otherwise your wasting your potential.
better
big improvement from your last 2. Some dialogue was still sloppy though, like for example the fight between those 2. It was too sudden and abrupt. Also improved "camera" angles, character expression, etc.
Keep it up.
Subtitles?
Aw man, what happened to the subs? T_T I can't hear english really good... Please at Chapter 4 put the subs >.<