Reviews for Exile Preliminary Rem

[lordofudead]

on its way

i know some animations worse this this have got better marks but...

you animation is very well done, the story has kinda been done to death unfortunatly.

the sound was bad and varied from time to time in quality. for a serious movie i almost laughed at your voice made sound effects for the hover bikes. your on your way. i think you have great potential but you should pick an original story.

my personal favourite animation on this website is XIN session 18. good story, fine sound quality, good animation. take some insperation from them

[RatherWilde]

I didn't really like it at all.

The fight scene at the beggining must of given me too high expectations , because the resty was awful. You had been quite sloppy in somes scenes (eg. you forgot to fill in half the grass with colour at one point). Also at times the sound was muffled.

For your next one just touch up on those things and i'll be rating it ten.

[Dunkan-Mania]

My Opinion

I didn't like it at all ... shure there were good scenes but the animation was a little bit too bad for my tastethe voices were ok but for that the story was even worse I mean that thing with the swords and then skycraper and then with some future vehicle ... for me it was one big chaos .... but thats just my opinion you can have your own taste and if yo like it I agree with that

RiverJordan responds:

I know what you mean, like.. big skyscraper, future vehicles, swords... basically im inspired a lot by games like final fantasy, but also books like lord of the rings. I also am not a fan of guns, swords are way cooler. As the series progresses i hope people can get more accustomed to whats going on.
Sorry that you didn't like it ^^

[SmileXXI]

Mmmhm

The story is too corny, I got bored since the very beginning......

The animation is great, but the drawing is really really bad ... (sorry...). I'm sure you can do so much better =).

[Sketchtech]

Way too typical and a little cheesy

I'm sorry but I think we've all heard this story before. The animation could probably use just a little bit more work also.

RiverJordan responds:

I understand that the beginning is rather generic, but fortunately the story after this is nothing like starwars :P (or fable, according to the guy who posted below this...i've never played fable anwyays)

I wrote the story when I was like 15, then i animated this chapter soon after, so i cant go back and change the chapter. Within chapter 4 and 5 the story you'll see branches out to be much different than seen here. :)