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Reviews for "Exile Preliminary Rem"

I didn't really like it at all.

The fight scene at the beggining must of given me too high expectations , because the resty was awful. You had been quite sloppy in somes scenes (eg. you forgot to fill in half the grass with colour at one point). Also at times the sound was muffled.

For your next one just touch up on those things and i'll be rating it ten.

You could've done better...

But never the less the fight scenes Were done well, The animation was so-so. Good voice overs.

RiverJordan responds:

Keep in mind i wasn't really "Remaking" the flash, i just went over everything with the tablet, and the fight scene was added as practice, plus its more of what i originally wanted, just my method was odd.. for the original.

Awesome!!

Good job! I like the fighting scene, but I think you could of done better with some of the animations... other than that I like it alot.

sweet

sweet story dude. it was amazing. but i think you did the animaion better int he first part than the 2nd part. but i still enjoyed this. my only complaint was probably some of the voice acting. it just needs a little more work and emotion for the characters but thats all. great work overall and cant wait till the next one.

Awsome!

This flash was really cool liked the fight scene