Reviews for Mario & Luigi VS. Bowser

[ShinyLucario]

Oh, lord...

Um, OK, first of all, use a reference for the characters so that you can draw them better. Pull up a picture of Bowser and try to draw him from the reference, because your drawing of Bowser was pretty bad; you used the oval tool and line tool to many times, and you just scribbled on the hair. You didn't draw Mario and Luigi to bad, plus, I found it funny that Luigi just fell out of the sky at random and didn't do anything in the fight. The voices were kind of cheap, and, well, the backgrounds were not too good. I give this a 3 overall.

HolyDemonAndy responds:

Thank you. I think that was more generous than what a few others have given. X) Lol. But nonetheless, have you ever played Super Mario Bros. 3? I tried to make the background look like that. Also, I used the oval tool for a lot of it. Either way, I know what you mean though, my background for my first Flash was much better, I felt. It wasn't that good, but it was better nonetheless. I actually didn't scribble on the hair - if I remember correctly, I actually used multiple ovals and gave it a jagged-like line or something to that effect. I also intentionally made it so it looked like Mario's and Luigi's arms were away from each other because I wanted to give it a certain feel. I've seen a few animations with it before, but I forget what they were. XD Lol. I thought it'd fit. :) Even though I know my flash is so far away from being able to compare from the other flashes, it's in another universe, let alone comparing to the classics - I think (seeing as this was the most recent thing I saw that resembled it) it was the Maddness series-thing was what I was shooting for. :) I feel a bit nervous about this. XD Lol.

Edit: Oh, wait, I remember now. X) I only used multiple ovals to do the hair, but the line was straight.

[2beastin]

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why does bowser have Ganondorf hair?

[Pampman]

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wyh? dont you see that this got everything which you don't need for even a bad flash?

there is 1 point for you, because i believe that you could do better. if your animation skills are not skilled enough, i can understand this, you could care more about a story or a better joke.

HolyDemonAndy responds:

I didn't intend for it to have a joke in it. X.o; I just intended it to be a small short that you might get some enjoyment out of watching - like, oh, that was kind o'cool. Etc.

[Pivot123]

Horrible

it wasn't good. the only funny part was the pause, and they didn't look anything like they were supposed to be. 0

HolyDemonAndy responds:

Well, I'm glad you liked the pause, lol. XP Really-truly. :) Whether you're being sarcastic and snobby or not, I can't tell, but I really don't care too much. I didn't intend for it to be good or funny, whether you're being sarcastic or not, I added it in there that way you could see Luigi's name above his head. It would've gone too fast otherwise. X) Lol. :P

[lewisefc]

short, boring, but keep trying.

for your first submission it wasnt bad but it wasnt good, but its leaning more to the bad.

the quality was not great t was mario standing on its head and the end.

i like the screen in screen thing you had going on so thats why i gave a 2/5 and a 3/10, work more and you will have some good flash videos up in a while, just keep practicing at it.

HolyDemonAndy responds:

Thank you. :) It's also my second Flash. XD Lol. And I know the quality wasn't too good - I'm not that great an artist on Flash yet, as I said - but you might not've read it - but I've been focusing on After Effects animation and Lightwave. :) Thank you for your review and vote, especially since it wasn't awfully humiliating and such. X) I used Final Cut to do that screen-in-screen thing, if I understand what you're referring to. :)