Interesting approach
Some nice Pseudo 3D effects in there, and nice pacing.
The dialogue came accross a little flat, and perhaps, it all happened to quickly.
Regardless, its nice to see something like this on newgrounds, makes a nice change from the usual fair.
Double edged sword
The animation was superb, but...the dialoge, the acting; horrendous. If it was intended to be that way, then I don't think it was the right way to go. Good effort in any case.
Nice, exept for the dialogues
You did a great job here, the flying anymations were nicely made, and so were the camera angles, even if it wasnt very dynamic. it was going fine until they started talking. the dialogues were good, but the way they were spoken wasnt so good, specially the seagull (girl), she must hve been more stylish and less "teen girl" specifically when asking questions. also, no mouth movement? i understand they're birds and the talking is like sybmolical or something.
mmh... i dont know, there should had been some syncronization beween animation and speech, maybe flapping wings or something, it would make it look like they're part of the same movie and not just a bunch of voices thrown into the timeline : P
i didnt get the message so my guess is that its pretty deep :)
Good work.
Signifying
It realy shows how most people realy dont care about outhers thoughts like myself,and your trying to tell people that
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it was ok