Nice
Great graphics, great audio, liked the idea, very original.
Nice
Great graphics, great audio, liked the idea, very original.
I must say
The animation and quality of the flash as a FLASH was good. But, however, as a story I found it.. lacking somewhat. Perhaps it was just the rushing into different feelings. One moment they love eachother, then hates comes into play at the next. A smoother feel is needed, if you catch my meaning,
most of all
I like how it breathes feeling and thought
Good animation, but lackluster story
I'm totally willing to agree with everyone on the animation; it's among the best I've seen on Newgrounds. My issue is with the story. Your characters are boring, and their dialogue is wooden. I realize that this may be because English isn't your native language, but if you get voice actors try to get one to read over your script.
...deep
I think this was deep in a way. I was listening to it after watchin it the first time while I was on a new window, writing my girl. I almost embarrassed myself by almost tearin. Im in a public computer lab. It was deep. just work on the voice overs. It sounds as if they're reading.