Good begining... and end... the rest...
Dude, i liked it at first, your preview caught my eye and i gave it a good score, but this is... the dancing completely KILLS the serious vibe going on. I'm sorry man but theres no excuse for making a Frankenstein of serious shit (i.e. people getting killed) and the more lighthearted stuff. if they had been in different flashes, that'd be alright, but dude... plus the dancing went on WAY too long.
If you kept it consistent, this would've won more of my respect and maybe more portal awards.