hmmm
animation was decent at soem parts good at others. The Fallout style thing was neat but in all honesty at the end with those 3 quotes that was just so gay i cant even express it. Its called individualism, there are plenty of self made men and women so if you're poor then fix it dont blame it on others. that whole "err corporations are evil" thing is ignorant as you can get. i want my minute of life back after watching this.
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I don't know why that guy had all those stitches but it was okay.
Next time add subtitles.
Good animation, poor story
I'm giving this a 2 for the good animation. The story needed to be expanded on to deserve a higher score. What on earth did this have to do with corporations or gated communities? What was that frankenstein clawed monster person at the end? I couldn't even tell if he was friend or foe or why they were seeking him out. And what's with the helicopters with the military gunners? Even if there are answers to these questions on the the website you linked me to, that doesn't help the flash any. I shouldn't have to go to another site to figure out the purpose of a flash on this site. I'm reviewing the flash you submitted, nothing more.
It's a start.
I can't say that the animation or story--or lack thereof-- was very good in this and perhaps some more time spent would have produced something that made a little more sense. It was a good idea, though, and the drawing was well done. I can't say anything that people haven't already said. It's got potential but take the advise constructivly and keep working at the animations and it'll come.
NOT BAD
NOT BAD IN DEED
BUT NOT GOOD EITHER