Needs more FPS
The animation is pretty good and I like how you got the paper being set up in the start, but I think it could be better if you added more frames throughout to make the animation smoother.
Reviews for "Wither"
Rofl
Did the guy actually pee himself? Looks like in one scene there's pee running down his leg.
Nice!
Pencil and paper animation is rare. I do appreciate a good bit of creativity and originality every now and then. Thank you!
WOW!
Don't pay attention to others who said that you should buy a better camera.
The music was great, and that's not even seapking of your incredible talent!
Personnaly, i think u got a great shinig future on Newgrounds, Dude.
nice job
first off, i hate reading revews of works like this about the technical side of actual shooting it. "get a better camera" lighting sucks" i mean these are NO BUDGET animations. cmon people judge on the merit of ART!
sorry just had to rant.
anyways, there was some really good stuff in here. your character design was simple so i wont say anythiing about it. however the style in which you created the world around him gives good hint about your creativity. which is definatly present. i love the short bursts of colour, they show your not scared of experimenting a little. and we all know how far that can go. although i beleive the camera work was just fine as it was. the only improvment i could suggest would be (of course) to put in more frames. few scenes were a little choppy. now whether you "wanted it to be like that" or not, i think this animation would benifit from it. aesthically of course! youve definatly inspired me to try again with my digitial camera. i attempted this before HANDHELD! ahaha i bet you know how that turned out. but i got my self a tri pod so mabye i'll have better luck.. how much money do you wanna bet that i come back regretting most of my words in this review? well good luck on future animations!