nice
nicely done
Reviews for "Wither"
paper tweak
honestly, it wasn't superb.
the animation was fairly sloppy. try using onion skinning next time or draw frames borders while you animate- and definitely use a better camera (better yet, a scanner) with CONSISTENT lighting on each exposure. the inconsistent twitchy flashing of all the frames was very painful to watch, even though some of the transitions were good. nice use of tweens and fbf, but like I said keep the lighting the same on each frame
the audio choice was not very pleasant, neither was the compression. try making some original music to accompany a video
cheers for the effort though. I always enjoy watching an old-school style fbf animation.
keep it up
keep it up
I'm such a huge fan of paper drawn animations on newgrounds. I want more, always more. I'd also work on your smoothness, those extra frames really make a difference.
Twitches a little.
The animation was kinda cool, the 'out of the pages' style has been done, but I still like. But that song kinda killed it for me. I'm not sure if it was just the compression or what, but...ow. Hurt my ears a bit. Keep up the effort.
soo good
loved the little burst of colour