Well...
It's never a good idea to submit test animations into the Flash Portal. Hopefully, you can make a very well animated movie that's a coupe of minutes long with a basic story or conflict.
Reviews for "3D Animation Test"
Smooth and Well made
Those are very nice models, I don't spot any flaws within the animation nor within the models themselves. However You didn't show much to this. It doesn't keep your audience interested. I do have a suggestion though for 'displaying' these if you're going to continue. It would probably even look nicer to your audience if you took all of your short animation displays and put them into one flash, like a porfolio with a neat set up and cover design.
Hmm, pretty good
The artwork is pretty nice, and the animation is pretty smooth, but the 24 frame one jerks a little when it eh... is facing my left. I think. Whatever, it's still a little jerky. As I said, the art is pretty nice, but this wouldn't be too helpful for a "real" animation. If your going to use these to animate, I would suggest animation say:
Minigun
MinigunFiring
MinigunStopping
MinigunRecoil
MinigunBullet
After which, you can combine them (those were suggestions. I don't draw guns in detail, or I haven't yet, so those were off the top of my head) to create things in your animation if necessary. Also, in future, I'd suggest not submitting tests? Thanks, and once again, decent work.
Bleh
Yeah okay, the artwork looks good and the animation is also very nice, though a little slow. There isn't really much else here though, no sound or anything really worth watching, so it has no real entertainment value, I'm not really a big fan of watching peoples tests on Newgrounds. I would suggest uploading it to a host then posting a topic in the flash section for test feedback.
It might be nice to see what you can do with this though, you could have had some short clips with interaction between scenes, give them a background and everything, just to look nice. Otherwise it's nothing more than a test, good luck with other works.
0/5
<3
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Hmmm
A bit lack lustre, surprised it even got threw the portal.
The animation was good, actually it looked excellent, you've got some talent there. Bit worried about the file size though need to work on your compression a bit.
Well there was nothing else really, what you had there was good, just a waste of a submission, would like to see what your movie will look like that you're using them in though, I look forward to it
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