Awesome
I liked it a lot! Great storyline, great animation, great sound but not the best sorry to say. At times of the flash the animation was either great or at times the animation looked poor if that makes any sense. The choice of FF Battle Music wasn't that great, i'm sure you could do better. Other than that, I would like to see more from you!
all i ghave to say is
More sound PLEASE!!! its a great story, a masive project im sure but please with the next one use more sound
We've learned a lot from this piece. Of course we'll put in more sound nxt time!
Hey homeboy!
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0. Hello.
1. Good Points:
- Graphics (as always, I've always been a fan of your artwork, I especially liked how you did Hahara and the machineries)
- Coloring (your coloring has come a long way, it isn't too bright anymore)
- Voice Acting (finally you've found yourself voice actors! I remember a few months ago you were asking for my help recruiting some)
- Music (anime and game inspired but it's okay, in moderation)
2. (Not so) Good Points
- Graphics (as opposed to the good point, the other characters were underdeveloped but this is understandable. Why would you spend 8 or so hours drawing up someone that you're going to kill off in a matter of seconds, right?)
- SFX (the training sequence, among others, seems to lack sfx maybe in sequels you can assign some for at least the katar "slash" sequence)
- Animation (I'm not one to lecture you about animation because I'm weak at it as well but there are alot to improve. I must admit, you have shown tremendous improvement in that field though.)
- Story (knowing you, you do tend to lean towards the anime-style of storytelling and nothing is wrong with that. What you can do is maybe separate a little from that style so that you can make a style of your own, do you get me man? I must admit, the long narration sequence was a little bit tedious to watch, maybe you could lessen that and leave room for interpretation, ala western style of storytelling.)
3. I left a pm of congratulations in your inbox.
4. Good Day.
5. Regards, Sif
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Great story, awsome drawings, but.....
The best part about your work is the storyline and the drawing! I was hooked onto the plot when I saw the trailer for this episode. I saw that it had the potential to become a great series! Especially with your very talented drawing skills, BUT I have to point out one thing. The only part that disappointed me was using pictures of cities to have as your background at the beginning of the episode! It through me off a bit because the background would switch from a fully drawn out background to a picture from a website ( I'm assuming ). Other than that I got really into it and it holds my interest. I can't wait until the next installment :D ! Keep up the good work !
Umm.....
the animation was awesome...very nice.....but for me the final fantasy music was kinda weird...im sorry...the story wasnt bad....the voices could be better....i already know the next episode is gonna kick ass....keep it coming....great job.