points for trying, i suppose
your right, you do need a template, and you also need to improve the sound quality of your movie. i couldnt hear what im asuming was supposed to be jigsaw at all. i know you have it in you to be good at this, but this isnt a very good example of it. if you think your own work is crap, that means your probably not trying hard enough
why no 7?
was it a monkey?
the sound was so poor i didnt get what it was. the drawings didnt help.
the saw thing wasnt good.
i think you need better sound quality and a good idea of what to make.
Hope this is helpfull
I couldn't even tell it was supposed to be a monkey, the tape was also pretty quiet compared to the rest of it but the overall idea was sort of ok . Bit short and endings were kind of disappointing.
Okay I'll review it.
The first problem is that you cant hear the tape recorder unless you turned the volume up all the way. The main reason for why your movies may have been blamed is because it seems that this was only 1/3 thought out. Like you were sitting around with your friends one day and you though "Hey that would be cool", no dude you have to put more thought into a movie then just going on a half baked idea. So really just try to improve your drawing skills and your movies ideas is what I'm saying here.
pissed off
wtf,
1. the tape recorde sound was so low i had to fully turn up my already loud speakers.
2. crappy drawing
3. and crappy story (this movie went for no more than two minutes)
4. i hope this gets blammed
ftw,
1. I fixed the sound problem, so now you're down to three complaints...although I'm not sure what a " recorde " is, but oh well...
2. Crappy drawing? Yes, I must admitt my flash animations are quite inferior to the hundreds upon hundreds of front page submissions that you've created...
3. I'm confused...first you insist on quality and then you demand quantity...which is it? Are you saying that the duration of the flash limited the overall experience which you could enjoy? I wish you could have been a bit more specific...
4. Since this flash was submitted on the 18th of April, it has continued to live on. I do, however, feel sorry to let your hopes down. Perhaps I'll notify you on the day of my next flash, and maybe then it will get blammed.
~EJE