Okay I'll review it.
The first problem is that you cant hear the tape recorder unless you turned the volume up all the way. The main reason for why your movies may have been blamed is because it seems that this was only 1/3 thought out. Like you were sitting around with your friends one day and you though "Hey that would be cool", no dude you have to put more thought into a movie then just going on a half baked idea. So really just try to improve your drawing skills and your movies ideas is what I'm saying here.