Super Nice for first flash.
I have yet to send in my first flash submission. I have done one, but it wasnt as nice as this. I see great potential.
Reviews for "Fly Away - First Flash"
ChiChiRoma responds:
Thanks. =]
You'll do just fine! ^^b
needs sound
with the right sound track this could totally pwn
ChiChiRoma responds:
Thanks. :)
Actually...
This isn't bad at all for your first flash. Heck, it's better then almost any "first flashes" I've seen. It's not just random stickmen with violence, and it's longer than 5 seconds. It's a little hard to tell what's going on without any sound or text, but I think I kind of understood... maybe...? The animation is decent, and the drawings aren't terrible. The whole flash could use more body, but for your very first attempt, it's actually pretty cool.
ChiChiRoma responds:
There wasn't any story, if nothing at all; I was just adding things one after another. Originally it was supposed to be a dog wagging its tail. Then I kinda overdid it. :D
Thanks alot. :)
Music and Color
make sure to add those to your next flash. with out them it really kind of boring.
ChiChiRoma responds:
I'll work on that. :)