great job
needs some sound and color, but it was amazing and smooth. Great job, really. I was a little nice because I really liked the look of it, and you show promise. I 5'd it.
I'd love to voice act for one of your flashes (demo on my userpage) I hope to see some great submissions from you in the future! Good luck.
nice
I was really impressed with this, the animation was very well done. You show alot of promise, I look forward to viewing more from you in the future. Oh yeah also your not a Noob ok, who knows you could be the next Noogai.
Thanks alot! :)
Next Noogai? XD! Highly doubtful, but its a nice thought. Thanks. :)
it was good
the animation was clean, the drawings were good but im not sure if there was a plot and it desperately needed sound all in all it was really good for a first flash
There really was no plot, it was just me adding one thing after another for the hell of it. XD
Thanks for the advice, I'll try some sound next time. =]
Beautiful.
I've gotta say, this was simply magnificent stuff here -- you have talent. :D
For starters, the animation was beautiful. Everything was smooth, and truth be told, you drew like a pro. I loved the anime design you put into your characters, and it felt natural and looked great. Normally I'd say that you should have a nicer background than just white, but for a first flash, I'm more than happy to let it slide.
There's a major problem though... you need sound pretty badly -- with just some sort of classical tune in the background, this would easily be one of the best flashes I've seen on Newgrounds for a long time...
G'luck!
...Magnificent? Thanks. XD
I didn't even know how to import sound when I made this. *serious noob* But I do now, hopefully I can make up the missing colour and sound next time I do this. =]
Very good!
However you need music or some form of audio, color or something to make it interesting and some explination...I was rather bored with this but it has so much potential! keep it up!
Yeah, I agree its kinda boring.
Thanks for the review. =]