really good
that flash is awesome, but its sorta strange, but its still great!
Reviews for "An Important War"
Imaginative.
Good, yes good.
It is pleasing to see in the anime riddled style of our time, that someone has the foresight to see beyond and onto a much more unique path. Your efforts do not go unnoticed judging by the number of positive reviews.
Huh?
Is this movie supposed to be really deep or something? I didn't get it. Really nice animation though, I can see you have a lot of potential on Newgrounds. Keep up the good work!
A wonderful flash burdened by many silly mistakes
I love the message, abstract as it may be, however as the heading says, a few things went mildly awry:
-The explosions were just bad
-The motion blur on the falling bomb was kinda funky
-The propellers of the airplanes need to be faster
-The wheels of the little war machines lack dimension; they look paper thin. In addition, their bullets look ridiculous. It needs to look like they could actually hurt something
However, these are tiny grievances, and all in all, your flash is quite a number. Kudos.
cheshirecat1582 responds:
well let me start off with saying "Im so glad you didn't vote low because of those things"
The explosions - lol yeah Im not used to making violent movies... I need allot of help in the explosion department!
The Motion blur - It was kinda meant to look choppy... I didn't really put a motion blur on it because that would be too easy I thought... but looking back on it... it was prob a bad choice...
The Propellers - Yeah I totally agree!!! they need work!! actually I was going to go back and do some tweeks to the whole project but when i saved it the last time it corrupted the file... so Now I cant change anything... which makes me sad... but I luckily saved a swf file...
The Wheels - your right again... I should have made them look 3D more... and the bullets was actually a last add that I didn't get saved... I had them look more real but then crashed file... :(
I just wanna say I love these kind of reviews! I need all the help i can get!!! thanks so much for taking the time to give constructive advice!!!
Weird Song
But beautiful graphics, very imaginative =]