What a trip!
That's some crazy awesome artistry and animation you have going on there. Pretty effing weird as well. I'd recommend it for front page if my opinion mattered.
Oh, and it also managed to hold my interest for the whole time (which is pretty hard to do).
A wonderful flash burdened by many silly mistakes
I love the message, abstract as it may be, however as the heading says, a few things went mildly awry:
-The explosions were just bad
-The motion blur on the falling bomb was kinda funky
-The propellers of the airplanes need to be faster
-The wheels of the little war machines lack dimension; they look paper thin. In addition, their bullets look ridiculous. It needs to look like they could actually hurt something
However, these are tiny grievances, and all in all, your flash is quite a number. Kudos.
well let me start off with saying "Im so glad you didn't vote low because of those things"
The explosions - lol yeah Im not used to making violent movies... I need allot of help in the explosion department!
The Motion blur - It was kinda meant to look choppy... I didn't really put a motion blur on it because that would be too easy I thought... but looking back on it... it was prob a bad choice...
The Propellers - Yeah I totally agree!!! they need work!! actually I was going to go back and do some tweeks to the whole project but when i saved it the last time it corrupted the file... so Now I cant change anything... which makes me sad... but I luckily saved a swf file...
The Wheels - your right again... I should have made them look 3D more... and the bullets was actually a last add that I didn't get saved... I had them look more real but then crashed file... :(
I just wanna say I love these kind of reviews! I need all the help i can get!!! thanks so much for taking the time to give constructive advice!!!
Awsome!
Loved the Animation, Loved the Idea and LOVED the music!
tough to pull of but all and all o.k.
I really wouldn't have gotten the choice between love and war but looking at it again I kinda saw it you kind of went on a more common ledge making something confusing with great graphics but you made it interesting enough to keep someone watching I'dbe shocked if this was blammed
Wow.
That was...trippy.
The animation was very slick and I liked how it had a type of surreal background on it. (I mean like the tanks and the people with gas masks)