Pretty Good
It made me smile. Voice acting though; I'd think L0lcatz would sound over the top and absolutely ridiculous, but they sound kinda "meh" in this video. Up the voice acting and we will be looking at a true winner ;3.
Reviews for "Lolcat History (Part 1/6)"
Don't much care for it...yet
Improve the voice acting for your main character, and voice acting overall. Use more enthusiasm and exaggerations because that is the basis of lolcats and stuff. If you planned to be bland, then sure. But just know it's coming off as if you're not into your own story. And remember, eggsajurashunz!
Soooo funny!
Lets start from the beginning:
The titles, it seemed like a miniature parody of roots, then of law and order, am I way off?
Anyway, I loved the whole thing! Its SURE to be a cult classic on newgrounds. I, personally love Lolcats, I go on the sites nearly every day, and one who also knows these cats and their titles would laugh like I did. I look forward to the next installments! I also look forward to seeing more lolcats, maybe even that walrus with the bucket. (By the way, I loved the way you used monorail cat)
Anyway, I liked how you built the charecters, I liked how smoothly they ran, and I thought that the set mouths would annoy me, but I realized that it'd be better than doing some cartoon mouth.
All in all, one of the best animations I've seen recently, and possibly the best light inside joke animation out there. Nice work, this deserves a 5/5, and a 10/10
jiggitysmith responds:
Thanks :D Don't get too far ahead of me here. The walrus and lot more of the popular lolcats show up in the next 5 segments. Expect part 2 at about 8:30pm Eastern Std. time today. Part 3 will be out this coming Friday at the same time.
This is good!
What's good in your flash :
-The perspective of a good story
-Nice theme and a great use of it
-The choice of real or lolcat subtitles (haha!)
-Nice voices
What could be improved :
-More use of music (Your trailer was great, it had music) like during transtition scenes or just very soft background music
-Better backgrounds (I think it would be a great addition to your flash if they looked just a little better)
-Release of other episodes and faster! :P
This will probably be a really good serie. Don't mind the haters. Keep up the work and I can't wait to see if your flash skill improves even more as the episodes advance.
Great
W00t! Absolutely love those L0lcats!
But you have to make better backgrounds, cuz those were unfortunately...erm.... not tooo good.
jiggitysmith responds:
Yea.... :-/ I made them 320x240 to save space only to find out I really didn't have to. But they seriously take almost an hour to render so I never got around to fixing it.