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Reviews for "The Tale Of Varkun"

wow this is was great

OK great animation in my opinion very good story line good length good ending really made me want to see the next episode u have to make it ull get great reviews on this :)

the music was OK i mean the bits with the waves and stuff if u add voice acting this will be a hit sires also u should try and make it a bit quicker so the dull points which were very little will move faster

tips
try adding voice acting
faster in the bits were there is more talking
longer (only cause i really want to know what happens :) quicker )
try adding a stop play forward button if u do make them longer

any way great movie u get a 10/10 5/5
and hope u don't take too long in releasing the next one in the sires

I like it.

Just a little constructive criticism, because that's what the comments are mainly for:

Get some voice actors, and try matching up the voices to the characters mouths, that way the viewer doesn't have to press space. The frame rate could be a little faster, but other than that, it was a great Flash. You have a good story down, keep it up!

Nice.

Good character design, needs a little more story and faster progression.

Not bad at all. Keep up the good work.

Nice!

Hey man i like your style on flash! very nice works well.. keep up the good work look forward to future projects! :-D

4/5 9/10