nice
your animation seems to be getting better and better which is good to see
Reviews for "The Tale Of Varkun"
I like!
The animation and the story are really good, keep working!
Good i thought
i think you did really well not to have a tablet .. its very hard to draw with a mouse and i think you did as good as you could for that.... watch the madness series .. or even play rayman if you want to get the hands and the feet just right .. i thought that could have been done a tiny bit better but Well done without tablet
Mixed feelings
It has some good art and some very good art and OK sounds/music. The story line is good enough, tho the dialogue isn't great.
However the format with the hands and feet like that is irritating and some of the sounds are a bit basic/crude, tho all are clear enough.
The speaking method- subtitles with buttons- is very basic, tho at least its all clearly written and generally spelt well.
Nice, but still need some work.
Ok flash, but far from perfect.
Its ok to have hands and feet without arms or legs, but you could try putting a little less distance between the feet, sometimes they were pretty far away from the body and that looked weird. Put a little more sound into it, and add a few more
expressions on the faces (when they fight the faces are frozen, looks kinda weird)
Otherwise, pretty nice. Far better than the average flashportal flash.