Reviews for The Fairy Future Mother

[Ragnarokia]

Could have had improved art work.

The characters could have had more work done to them though as the way in which they were made, made their faces look bad mostly, but then the bodies, though they had correct proportions were still a bit ugly. You should try using a different pallet for the face and make the features look nicer. I would suggest looking at the Author of the Paladin series latest tutorials, as these could help with this style.

The music though was very good quality, and seemed to have been correctly shrunk to lower the file size. The voice acting on this was very good and clear, there was no breathing or other interference. This made it good to watch through.

The movement was not fractured as it ran smoothly, this was very good, though at some points of walking I think most apparent when he was slinging eggs, the animation could have been improved at places like this.

The artwork was a little to sharp, or blocky, as there seemed to be mostly rectangles etc. of single colours that made up the majority of the flash, you should try and make more with the mouse, for the personal touch. Also you could add gradients to the single colours.

Over all a very good flash, just needed some more time on the art work.

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[LilFugitive]

Ugly characters

You made an interesting flash with this fairy yet I didn't like it, let's sum things up

Pros:
+ Voices were good
+ Story was good

Cons:
- Ugly characters, really work on the body structure and don't use the pencil that often
- Bad animation, sometimes it looked like he was doing a cripwalk instead of walking
- Blinking looked very bad
- Eyes and mouth looked like that of a girls

Overall:
This is a flash that just should stay in the portal, because of it's nice storyline. But there really needs to be some mayor improvement on the art and animation

[NintendoMadness]

3/5 and 8/10

- Good stuff -
There was nice choice of colouring and blur effects. The VA was fairly decent and there was too much of talking.

- Bad stuff and improvments -
There was way too much use of the line tool, it all looked too straight, maybe if you used lots more of the brush tool then it would of given the story a much, much nicer effect and it would of looked a hell of alot better too. Also the lips were way too big and looked like females lips on a male.
There was too much block colouring, for intsance in the eyes, the cenrtal part of eye dosn't have one colour is has many shades. If you gave different colours it would improve because you have ALOT of close-ups.

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OxSox responds:

Thanks for the review I'll try to keep your improvements in mind for my next movie.

[Cyberdevil]

lol

Funny story, and a nice twist to the ending too, heh, not what I expected. The animation was smooth, the voice acting was great and the the plot was good as well. Only thing that bothered me a little were the thin black hacky lines around the characters, if you use gradients of the same colors ( like dark blue outlines on light blue objects ) and shading instead of black lines to mark wrinkles, etc, it would be perfect. Loved the choice of audio, and the background colors when he moved from home/ the stars/etc. Everything flowed on nicely. Keep it up!

-cd-

OxSox responds:

That's a great idea! I'm going to definitely take your advice on the outlines, thanks for the tip!

[LenardNotLenny]

Sweet

That was a funny, well put together piece of flash. The animation was completely smooth and well done, but I can't say so much about the art. The pencil line is something I've never done before so I couldn't tell you how to make it better. What I will say is that it was clean, but sometimes the actual drawing itself was a little awkward. In my opnion, your voice acting was phenomenal. That was the highlight of the flash.

I was really impressed with your lip-synching, but the lips... well, it looked like everyone was wearing lipstick. I would recommend adding a more dramatic ease to your tween. Because the tween movement looked very slow.

Well done.

OxSox responds:

Thanks for the review. I bought a book on drafting and artwork, so hopefully that'll help things on the art side.