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^^Good Points^^
Well done! I was quite surprised by this one, because looking at it, it seemed to have really crappy graphics at first, but you showed a lot of skill graphically. The animations were pretty smooth and the detail in the drawings was refreshing. A funny character and a funny storyline. Nice movie!
^^Needs Improving^^
Just work on the animations more. Sometimes they still look a little strange, but still good overall. This was very good.
Alright
The main story to this seemed pretty good and the voice acting was nice too although the voice of the fairy seemed to be a little quiet at times, it was still alright. Some of the graphics here could have been a little better, so you might want to work on them and the smoke coming from the fairys fag seems to be a little fake, maybe work on more realistic smoke.
It's really only the graphics here that bugs me in parts, but some of them are pretty good too, the story is decent so yeah, pretty decent work on this one, just keep practicing and everything.
3/5
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= Review Request Club =
Pretty good
A nice little story with good voice acting with above average animations, it could be alot worse but also much improved.
The animation style I found to love and hate, you've got a really good sense of how the human body works and how to draw that, but I found that your overall character bodies were quite angular, and not realistic at all, but I can see alot of effort has been put into them, and you can really see.
The sound was good, |I liked the voice acting and the other random sounds, very well done.
The story was pretty funny, I really liked the ending too.
Overall this movie's individual parts work in an excellend harmony to create a really funny move, great job
=Review Request Club=
Alright
The plot was pretty funny, voice acting was good. Graphics had effort put into them, but there's room for improvement there. I think that your art style could be better, but you did pretty decent with what you've got. I think you've got a fair amount of promise for the future. With a bit of practice, the cartoons will look better, but everything else was really enjoyable.
So, good work, and good luck with your future projects.
WB
-Review Request Club-
Not bad
This movie is quite enjoyable, but some aspects need improvements. Lets start with what I though it was good in the movie.
The voice acting was great, no flaws, well recorded and very clear to understand, although the fairy's voice was lower than the other sounds, so you should raise ir a little The humour was nice, specally because that situation sometimes is real, where teenagers want to live alone. It was also nice that there was a scene selection menu at the end of the movie, but it should be also in the first menu, in case I don't want to watch the whole movie to get to an specific part.
However, some things in this movie need some serious improvements. One thing that deserves attention are the graphics. Some scenes weren't very good because of the drawing, specially the party scene and the egg-throwing scene. They need some improvements, specially the party scene. Detail them a little more, take your time to make them better. Also, the characters weren't well made. Their faces look weird, even a little square.
Take your time to improve in those scenes and in the character drawing. Also add that scene selection menu in the first menu. Hope to see a better version to this one, maybye even a sequel.
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