Speaking
The diaulauge (escuse my spelling) was a little bit of a sad attempt of a
dragonball Z script and didn't seem to dramatic.
And you could have made it longer and shown thee guy fighting some boss or other
Reviews for "Maple Story Assassin Will"
Short, Simple and to the point
It was a pretty good short. I agree with the previous two people as I had to skim to read what the bubbles said. Also, If there is a good story line, it could make a good series. Good work!
A definate possiblity
Although it was short it was pretty good. Like timaniac said you should put some though into increasing how long the chat bubbles stay on the screen because I also had some trouble with that. But this could be turned into a series possibly with the right story line. Just because the way you ended it, it has so much potential and can go in almost anyway.
good
you should make a sequal :D just make the word baloons there for a little longer because i couldnt finish reading half the stuff they said
Nice
Very good though it ws kinda dull to be honest cause he goes tehre trainingdone (we didnt see what they did) so yea its animation is good but you need to work more on the storyline