Looks good.
Well the story ooks really good, and its ok because it shows what happened in the past so we are informed in this. Graphics were decent, and animation was alright. I think you should add voices though, that would make this a whole lot better. Keep up the awsome work though! :]
It's not so great.
It could have been done better.
This is an okay Flash.
Original, but could use improvement
I'm a fan of the music, and the graphics are okay (I imagine you used a mouse rather than a tablet, but nice use of gradient) - I think others are right in saying it could use a voice-over, and if you just fixed a few of the glitchy sections, it might flow better.
I liked the mystical story and style, however - very much like an old legend or folk tale.
Odd
It isn't done too well as far as graphics go. And your choice for a font didn't match the story being told.
The story was also very strange, but I gave you points for effort.
ehh, my review
3: starting score
Story +1.5, Although this wasn't well told, there is alot of room for a great story in here, somwhere.
sound/acting -0.5, the music was ok, but looped poorly, plus the roaring seemed out of place.
animation -1.5, this was hard to watch, art sometimes come naturally, but often it doesn't, practice hard, you'll get better.
Verdict 2.5/5
Vote 2/5