It's not so great.
It could have been done better.
This is an okay Flash.
It's not so great.
It could have been done better.
This is an okay Flash.
wooooow
hahah that was so bad
ehh, my review
3: starting score
Story +1.5, Although this wasn't well told, there is alot of room for a great story in here, somwhere.
sound/acting -0.5, the music was ok, but looped poorly, plus the roaring seemed out of place.
animation -1.5, this was hard to watch, art sometimes come naturally, but often it doesn't, practice hard, you'll get better.
Verdict 2.5/5
Vote 2/5
Original, but could use improvement
I'm a fan of the music, and the graphics are okay (I imagine you used a mouse rather than a tablet, but nice use of gradient) - I think others are right in saying it could use a voice-over, and if you just fixed a few of the glitchy sections, it might flow better.
I liked the mystical story and style, however - very much like an old legend or folk tale.
Odd
It isn't done too well as far as graphics go. And your choice for a font didn't match the story being told.
The story was also very strange, but I gave you points for effort.