Frame Rate Trouble
If I were you work your bugs on the frame rate in most places. You have a lag problem and to say this it made my eyes look the wrong way. Work on your frame rate and I might watch it agian. Still a story plot based on a quest of work left over from his grandfather now that got me wondering. Story is perfect but if it was smooth I would of gave you a 9 or 10.
Dude no...
That ending was REALLY dumb....
"Fly fly fly" and they push him off a cliff because he saw a stupid dragon. It seemed like you were writing it and you ran out of ideas or you got bored of animating and so you just ended it. That really pissed me off....It was such a great flash until then. It would've been a 10/10 if it wasn't for the ending.
Other than that I love it.
I thought "Even is so gunna see Amy in the shower or something now that he is living with them" when that dude was like "Amy come here". :D.
Little relationships in movies and TV shows are awesome...Even + Amy = YESSSS.
So yeah.
Push him off a cliff because he saw the totem dragon talking about the skeleton key was dumb.
Fixit or do better next time and I might forgive you...lol.
As if you care what some stupid fan thinks. So yeah. Try not to have such a terrible cliff hanger next time....lol cliff hanger, he got pushed offa cliff :D.
I care very much what my fans think and since you've identified yourself as one of them, I respect your opinion. I do not agree with it however. It takes 4 months of preparation and getting my voice actors prepped is one of the first things I do. I actually had the ending planned out before most of the flash itself. Thanks for watching!
its good but
the animation and talking are a bit slow maybe speed things up i lil
Mkay....
Well the music and animation is pretty good and the story looks promissing, but the storyline just ags on too long. People need some action in these to keep their attention. This is the second episode and there has yet to be any action untill the last part of this 1. I can see that this series can be promising, but you have to keep peoples attention dude. Its like trying to grow a fruit tree without letting it have water. If you want to have a successful series you need to give it some action. Im hoping the next episode will have more action. Another thing is the title. You need to have an early reference to the title in a series. If som1 sees a video with the title "capture The Flag" they want to see somthing that has to do With CTF!!!! They shouldn't have to wait 3 episodes till they see something that has to do something with the title. Other than that its pretty good. Sorry for the 6, maybe your next will get a 10.
Well I understand people need some action but Evan almost gets decapitated by a ladder, he gets a bottle thrown at him and a horrible fate befalls him at the end. This may not quench the average Newgrounder's needs but it's something different and there's about a gazillion action flashes. The action will come though, and it will be well warranted :). As for the title, were you not listening during the observatory scene? Anyway, thanks for watching.
I Like it but it was to slow
I Love the Look, and the voices where good..
But the animations, music and voices made it way to slow to look at...
3/5 6/10