Reviews for Conditions1:The New Reign

[CheesyPretzels]

A Decent Prelude To Future Work...

I liked this animation - whether you put some thought into the story or whether you're borrowing from the other sources for inspiration, you've set yourself an excellent foundation for some eye-watering flash skills going forward.

Audio was nothing overly-fantastic but you'll agree it wasn't needed for more than mood music and shouldn't detract from the flash. Animation style was good too, though sometimes it could be a little cleaner - e.g. the announcer's glasses could have had frames to distinguish them from his face more, and the glove was monotone - some detailing, or colour gradient would have made it strand out. I can see it becoming quite key in future flashes so making it distinct seems important.

By way of constructive criticism I'd recommend some clarity around the setting - the speaker was talking to a room, but we don't know why, who he's talking to, or what the peace corp are - is this year 2007 or the future?
Some panning across a shadowy audience or glimpses of key figures in the crowd would be good to give some ambiguity and keep the people watching wondering who he's talking to. I can't second guess where your series is going but the background snippets all put future episodes into a nice context.

All in all, really decent flash skills and I'll be watching future episodes to see where this goes!

[Kuandohan]

Great

I liked it, Good voice acting and everything, That was really cool.

[Tomoson]

hmm.

it was an interesting concept. good work

[NightSickle]

Pretty good

The story is a little short when you watch both of the episodes but the quality is pretty good. And to the last rewiever I have this to say. Have you checked the spelling in the http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/417312 it has a space between com and /portal

[S4cr3d-Cr4p]

I don't know why people say it has a good story...

Seriously. You need to follow your ideas through. Someone has just come up with something that can move particles. First it would have been used for science, creating new chemical structures and manipulating tools. So you should've had the inventor talking about it's benefits to science etc. Then it would've been taken by the military and police forces, and used against criminals. Transforming matter into different forms is a retarded use of that kind of power as well - you could just pick up the criminal as easily, or rip them to shreds.
You didn't even think the terms through - how can you voluntarily take off the glove if you are dead? If you are dead, you can't give permission, so what is the point in the last terms?
The voice actor spoke their lines too quickly, and without enough passion or even correct vocal intonation. The script was also weak and I've already explained the weakness in the concept.
Finally, the quality of animation was average, but could've been better. Music was good though.

Perhaps some things to work on for the next episode.

DJJ-asshole responds:

It's just a story, pure fictional, so it doesn't have to be correct, it could've been another dimension...

Also, about the science, this is NOT a scientific story, I didn't want it to be some National Geographic show... I'd rather make it a mindless use of weapon story.

Also, about the shredding to piece, yea, that's going to happen, IN FURTHER EPISODES.

The last condition, about being dead.
No, you don't do it voluntary, but you do not resist either... How about just ripping it off someone's arm, when he's dead, the answer is: No, it doesn't work.

Oh, and the next episode is out already, for if you didn't read the comment.