im 13 also
well you remind me mi first and last movie and it was made in windows movie maker but anyway its a cool movie i give you a 7 just because you are new in this
Reviews for "Mario vs. Santa"
Gustavos responds:
cool
A promising begining
One thing I would change if I were you is start the music sooner, just having text on the screen with nothing else is a little boring. Hope to see great things from ya.
-jmantyk
Gustavos responds:
Yeah, I know. It's just how it ends so well and it gets more suspenseful when Santa actually makes it to Mario's world. What does jmantyk mean?
Not bad
Although the graphics weren't to great i still quite liked this, You could tell that you had actually put some time and effort into it. I enjoyed the way you tryed to use various camera angless instead of just one background, it made feel better produced. The soundtrack was also good and fitted well. Overall good job, just try and put a bit more effort into the graphics.
Gustavos responds:
Don't worry, I'm starting to focus on my art so it could be better. I made almost all the objects and all the forms of Mario using only the brush tool, because I'm still learning better techniques. Thanks for reveiwing normally.
Oldskoolkammy Review.
---GRAPHICS---
Well, the entire episode wasn't drawn that well. I would suggest art classes, maybe.
---AUDIO---
Epic. Nuff said.
---HUMOR---
I don't see it in any of this, except the elf getting run over. Rudolph was my fav reindeer, too.
---VIOLENCE---
Epic battle between two hippos. What more could you want?
---POSSIBLE IMPROVEMENTS---
Possibly the beginning of a decent series. As I mentioned before, you should sharpen your drawing skills, and add some humor.
---OVERALL---
Nice start for your career as an animator. This movie wasn't really good, but it definitely wasn't that bad either, because I've seen way worse [Kitty Krew]. Can't wait for your next production. 6/10 and voted 3.
Gustavos responds:
That's cool.
I'm trying to make good progress with being a better artist, but I've had little luck. I'm trying to learn new techniques, but I can't figure out any. I rushed this movie a lot because I wanted it out before Christmas and lazyness wasn't helping. I'm working harder on my next movie right now. I'm confident it will be much better than this.
Thanks for good comments and constructive criticism.
Funny idea
LOl this was a funny idea, mario and santa, some more effort could be put forth, more story depth more effects especially in the backround, but i do like the idea so keep with it.
Nice idea.
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