Reviews for Knuxrouge's Newgrounds

[Coop]

Needs sound

And animation, for that matter. You've given us a repeating loop of the generic four movements for the characters. Sonic just disapearing from the scene offered us so much more - why didn't he just run off?

What you need to do is invest in a microphone - It would have been much better with the addition of sound, to go with more animations for the characters.

Also, the remark of Shadow "Broke N***a" micht be seen as causing offense, so you may wish to stay away from that all together.

I'll look forward to your next cartoon and offer a fair criticism, should one be required of that also.

[Review Request Club]

knuxrouge responds:

Animation wasn't the centerpoint of the flash and the sudden vanishing of Sonic was deliberate.

I'm broke, so saving up for a mic will be pretty damn hard.

It was meant to be funny, no one so far has found it offensive and why should they if its directed at me?
Besides, for the record, I'm black.

Thanks for your review.

[hatchet130]

A 5 Cuz...

Shadow called you a "Broke n***a" XD

(no i'm not raceist...)

knuxrouge responds:

I'm black, what wrong?

[Auz]

Hmm

Hmm, this is quite an odd "my newgrounds" movie. Totally different from the other ones and I´m pretty glad about that. Some points for originality. I think the lay-out was okay too. It was pretty simple, just a black background and a white line with some characters on it, but it looked kinda cool. I also liked the font of the text and the music was alright.

There were also some things that I didn´t like too much about this movie. First off, the pause and play button were almost right in the middle of the screen. I´d say, that´s a pretty bad place to put buttons like those. Put them somewhere in a corner instead and perhaps make them smaller. Secondly, I think the movie started okay with a little talk about your stats and what clubs you´re in and stuff, but later on it got kinda boring and hard to follow. I know it was supposed to be funny, but it became such a long and pointless conversation. Seriously, try to make it shorter.

Overall 5 out of 10, 2 out of 5. It was okay, could still use a lot of improvement.

~Auz, Review Request Club

knuxrouge responds:

Thanks. I'm going to break this down, in my previous flash, Chaos Sonic. Everyone complained that they had to press something to pass the text, so I left that out in this one--but look, now people are complaining that the text passes too fast, so I added a pause and play button--but now, people are complaining that they have to pause and play--WHAT ELSE CAN I DO!! You have to understand, Some people are not going to like the system I use, because of their perference. I would say that your comments have been noted, but honestly, they aren't, becuase although I may use a system that appeals to you, there will be tons of others who would bitch and complain about it, so now, I'll use the system that appeals to me, because if no one else, I'll be satisfied.

Now to the other parts of your review. The buttons were put there, because that was the only place where it wouldn't interrupt the text, the size was made to make it easily accessable. You didn't find humor in it, but others did. Too bad.
Thanks for taking the time to write the review.

[Unknown2dark]

It was nice, but not enough

It was kinda funny, but sorry, I was looking for something better, but still, a nice piece of work (Advice:- Try to save up some money for a microphone)

[Review Request Club]

knuxrouge responds:

I am trying to save money, but I can't save something I don't have.
I'm broke--as in no money.
Thanks for your review.

[Little-Rena]

Not Great

I don't really think this is very well presented, it's very diffrent from many of the other "My Newgrounds" flash I will say, but really it could do with so much more. The whole stage is just 4 sprites and no real background, there isn't anything to watch other than the text.

I would suggest having some backgrounds, switching from character to character on screen and giving something to watch, otherwise it can just come across as long and unintresting. Try to add something the viewer can look at and enjoy, also voices would be good to have, maybe get a voice actor for some.

The idea of being diffrent from the others is good but the way you have presented it, in my view could really be improved. Good luck in future.

1/5

<3

= Review Request Club =

knuxrouge responds:

Well, in the term of flash and substance, I wasn't opting to impress anyone.
It was meant to be funny, cut and dried.
Too bad you didn't like for alot of people did.