Broke n***a. lol.
That's your Newgrounds man, that's your Newgrounds.
Reviews for "Knuxrouge's Newgrounds"
knuxrouge responds:
Yes, it is.
A nice twist.
This was a nice "My NG" twist theme right here. I really like this flash because it was just funny, and really fun to read. I think though that it should be like a button where you move on to the next line because I think other people here can't read fast enough. Still awsome game, and keep up the awsome work! :]
knuxrouge responds:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked the unique quality of it.
Not bad
Don't get discouraged when you see the first couple of categories I graded you on because there were a lot of good points in this flash that I really liked. So here it is:
Graphics/Animation: 5
As I grade graphics and animation based on the Top 50, it's hard to give you a good grade here, mainly because your characters really didn't do much at all. There really was no movement, and don't get me wrong I understand completely that it was a dialogue, but I was sitting there for a little and eventually my ADD starts to act up, which in a way kills the effect of the viewing experience when...nothing moves. One other problem I had was the text moved too quickly at times, maybe if you colored the text to the color of the character speaking it would make it easier to understand who was saying what at times.
Audio: 3
Nothing really to say here, it was the Sonic Shuffle playing on loop the whole time, which isn't a bad thing, I'd rather some sound than none at all. But sometimes the same sound gets monotonous after a while.
Originality: 7
Sonic sprites are about as common in flash movies as Mario sprites, but the reason you didn't get such a low score is because of what you did with your sonic sprite...you actually made one of those "My Newgrounds" things using your favorite characters, which I personally thought was really awesome. So nice job in the Originality category.
Humor: 7
I didn't get much humor out of it, although I did laugh at the snide comments that both Knuckles and Shadow were throwing in at random times. The ones that really had me going were both times when Shadow said "Broke N---a" - they really cracked me up. Sonic seemed to go a little overboard in how he acted, but otherwise it wasn't too bad for being text reading. It's getting harder and harder now though to make text that you can read...that will actually make a viewer laugh out loud. But good work here.
Overall: 6/10
It seems like a low score, but actually it's a really average score considering the type of flash you have to make for me to give a 9 or a 10. It's all preference of the viewer really, but for some reason this just couldn't keep my interest. At points it seemed to drag on. It was a dialogue and I do understand that, but sometimes it's hard to pay attention when it's all text reading. But I'm sure you could do better so good luck with future flashes!
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knuxrouge responds:
Thanks for your constructive critisism. I'm glad you liked it and I'm sorry you couldn't find too much interest in it.
Thanks for the good luck too.
Haha
Nice little flash, taking the "My Newgrounds" style and making it your own.
The graphics were nothing to write home about, simple sprite movement.
But I did really like the story etc, whitty and quite good in general, the only thing I would say is that it did drag on just a little too long, but still it was quite funny.
OVerall a good effort but a few major improvements are needed!!
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knuxrouge responds:
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
(title in work)
^^Good Points^^
A decent movie. I think you got a good amount of humor added into this with some good commentary by the characters from Sonic. I thought it was pretty interesting.
^^Needs Improving^^
Graphically this is pretty boring. You have the same looping animations over and over in the characters. Also, the framerate isn't high enough to make the animations very smooth. Definitely needs smoother animation.
knuxrouge responds:
I warned you in the note about the animation. It was at a minimum. The flash lags a bit, I chose not to fix it, becasue if I did, then the text will go by faster = more bad words.
Thanks for your review.