Annoying
Sorry, I didn't like it very much. It was extremely annoying and I could barely understand what anyone was saying and the sound quality really sucks. Didn't really get it or understand what was going on. I couldn't even sit through the first 3 minutes. That's how annoying it is to me.
*twich*
5 for creativity but you might want to try and work on your drawing
Very dark, albiet intriguing.
It shows a little window into madness, which e usually can only imagine what it's like there. After seeing all the flashes, it makes me feel for Alfred, and makes me nearly shed tears. The first flash, however, has enough gentle insanity to slowly lead us into Alfred's little world.
I liked the Pee-Wee Playhouse reference. The Secret Word thing. 'What do we do when we hear the secret word? We SCREAM..' Was that intentional? And, I must insist that you make more of these that appeal to the thoughts and feelings.
Saw pt 2 & 3 first
Then found part 1. I must say, you have a very awesome knack for portraying mental instability. This is the kind of stuff horror movie's always try to shoot for to show how "psycho crazy" the killer is, but horror movies always seem laughable. This here is just disturbing. Your flash helps elicit both pity and contempt for Alfred ... pity for having to go through his torment, and contempt for him turning into a psuedo-innocent ticking time bomb waiting to destroy others in a fit of rage.
I still can't tell if you yourself have gone through this kind of mental and emotional distress ... I'd almost say you must have in order to express it so well in the flash. I really hope it's just that you're very talented in conveying emotion and condition.
Not to sound sexist, but I think the fact that you're a woman helped you out in making this. You were able to add the subtle, effeminate characteristics to Alfred that some male molestation victims can sometimes take on, especially when they downward spiral into a feeling of helplessness. They start to take on a femenization in order to appeal to others' pity/mercy since they don't feel they can stand up for themselves ... they've basically had their spirit and self-esteem broken.
I hope you turned this in as part of a psych term paper or something...you definitely deserve more credit for this work than just as an artistic piece.
Two thumbs up!
WTF WAS THAT?!
I know shroom heads and acid addicts who could make a more sensable story. It is just...trippy. In fact, i'd go as far to say that it is the trippiest ANYTHING i have ever seen. I like a nice plot unlike some people so i give this a three, i give it a three and not nothing because i feel like you are an artist and while i didn't understand a tenth of it, you deserve your credientials.
Weird/