Bad
Very, very boring. It needs more action, and originality. Try better next time.
Bad
Very, very boring. It needs more action, and originality. Try better next time.
meh
while yes, I realize it was your first flash, it was very, sub-par to put it nicely.
Some suggestions i could give you would be:
1. Next time maybe draw something instead of using game footage
2. Make it longer
3. Add more action (people seem to like lots of action)
4. Add a actual story (Mario just fire-blasted a koopa, not really a story)
5. Try submitting things to NG alpha, and get suggestions from them on what to improve, and go from there.
I hope i've helped you, keep trying and you could be really good someday
wow
Definitly needs a story, and a real play button. You made it sound like everyone is an idiot.
to short