i have something in my eye :-(
That was a pretty good one, lots of emotion expended there, a bit though :-(
Reviews for "The Eitherworld's Banshee"
How Sweeeeeeeet!!!
*sniff* I started crying... Of course Not!!!! ^^ Very much sweet girly stuff with a touch of horror: Good Job! And because I don't discriminate woment you get a honest 10/10
Awwwww
That was really cute. As a part of constructive criticism. Only make the "Poik" sound when the girl moves her head at the beginning and do it two or three times. I don't know about anyone else but for me it took away from the seriousness of the story line like when she found that girl dead.
Unless of course you meant the whole thing to be a lighter-side scary flash. :) But overall good work and I love happy endings especially here ^.^
Not bad . . .
. . . for a girl. =P
Bah Grammar
That intro was fixed? Read it through again.
O.K. I'm a stickler for grammar but this was a good start overall...except for the priests ripping her fetus out...that was weird...