hmmm.....
that was very sad yet happy.....
i watched it over like 10 times......dam
Reviews for "The Eitherworld's Banshee"
Really good.
The animation wasn't the best, and the sounds were used at bad times, but the visuals were amazing. I really like the style. I also liked how you didn't use any words, really nice.
Nice
Besides the grammar, i like it you have very good animation skills, keep it up.
Alot of potential in this one!
Apart from the bad English grammar at the beginning and the overuse of sound effects, this was a really good flash :) The graphics were simply amazing, nothing wrong with that. If you just work on those small, non graphic-related flaws this might become an amazing flash movie (series?)
Keep it up, you're obviously very talented!
Cute
Nice lil short, if you want better grammar, I found these mistakes
-home of -> home to (of is only used when a "the" or name follows)
-song has the power to kill only by hearing her song-> wrong cause this would mean she kills by hearing, not singing-> correct would be: Just by hearing her song they suffer a gruesome death, or, they die simply from hearing her song.
- she was only a normal creature-> nope, that would suggest she never was a real banshee, correct: she was once
-the fact that transformed her-> fact is not really wrong, but weird, better would be: the reason she was transformed, the event that invoked her transformation, or something similar
- transformed in-> transformed to