...this could've turned into something better
the animation itself was pretty good and cartoony, which is probably what you were aiming for, but that's about the only thing that was actually par for what this could've been. you started with a good text intro, which, although it had some grammatical errors, did a good job of setting the story up. then you did the reasonable thing of showing an intro scene. but after that, the flash basically forced itself to end. the actual meat of the flash was just about as long as the introduction. i perfectly understood what happened, but i don't understand why you wrapped everything up so quickly. the mysterious set up had the potential to make this one flash a series, but instead you wrapped everything up in as little time as possible. sure there was a bit of story, but we don't even know who the people we see are, and the ending doesn't really give you a chance to explain it. you have the potential to make something a lot better with the animating skills you have, and i hope to see that in the future.