Alrite!
First i listened to it through my monitors. Second time i listened to it through my headphones and the third time i was just enjoying the whole arrangement. I wanted to make sure i didn´t miss anything before writing this review.
You know how to get my full attention. Flutes! African/ Ethnic rythms and lush, mellow strings... That makes for one hell of a cocktail!
I did not know you had such skills in arrangement. Now i´m not talking about the overall progressions and transitions. But the way you have made room and given each section a chance to be articulate. I hope you know what i mean by this. You know how a "classic" blockbuster song goes, they sound mostly the same. The only thing getting a chance to overpower the track is mostly very compressed strings sections and/ or trombones + timpanis poundering. Ofc that can be epic (there are many tunes like that, that i love.)
But why am i mentioning this now?! Because you haven´t made a blockbuster piece. You really have managed to create an orchestral song and all that comes with that genre. Evey instrument section is given a certain phrase or a chance to make themselfs audible. I really hope i´m making sense, hard for me to express myself, using musical terms in english. If there´s anything you want me to explain further, please feel free to pm me about it.
The intro: Nice use of suppressed cymbals. They really add to the overall decay and ambient thing you got going. When going over to the drums i find that they are lacking body. I would like for the drums to have somewhat more decay or at least to be more wet.
Nice transition over to the guitar. The perc really adds to the dramatic effect and makes for a nice (here we go) Btw i really like those guitar samples. Hypersonic you say!!!? (say wut!)
You know i love flutes. As do you =) I can hear that´s a panflute by the nice maneuvers. But i would like for the flute to have a wider image. Give it more room. By giving the flutes more room and also adding more wetness to the drums will really boost the ramps and overall ethnic atmosphere. I´m also aware of by doing so, you´ll bring the music alot closer, ruining the idea of using this song as a background.
I really like your build-ups. But the one that really catches my ear the most is the one at 2:10 Damn! that´s a nice buildup. Maybe by adding a suppressed cymbal also to that build-up could give it a little more edge?
I can see why you consider this song to be one of your best arrangements. I´ve said it before but i´m gonna say it again. You really do have the skills to come up with something original, clever and also bold. Your arrangement skills is those of a pro musician. Why do you think i praise your music. Somehow you can give life to a song that normally would be considered dull and lifeless. You work with alot of colour and warmth that you apply onto your songs.
Keep it up ffs!
- Jay B
Vocalsync.com