okay.
i have to say i agree alot with armed civilian good story but animation and sound could do with a little work.
Reviews for "Final Fantasy 7 -Remnant-"
SiMpSoN-bRuVaS responds:
yea dude i see what your saying =P
Storyline wasn't bad, but animation needs work
Ok, I don't know what to say. I have played FF7 and watched AC, so I know the main story. The storyline is okay, involving suspense and not compltetely cliche themes. I kinda like how Tifa became a remnant because of Cloud(completely unexpected lol)
However, the animation itself needs work. Firstly, the voicing. Now, I don't mind the quality(I know you did it all yourself, though you may want a better microphone cuz I couldn't hear Barret really well). And the sync is a bit off for the mouths - not too big a deal.
The movement of characters however, was a bit bland and uh...kinda sloppy. For example, when Cloud walks to Vincent, he looked akward - something to improve on a sequel. But the fighting, where he spins his sword and stuff, that can be done better. Basically, you need more work on the art and how you put it together.
Another problem is the music. It TOTALLY doesn't fit the mood, because this feels like a comedy. No, I'm not joking.Why? Well Cloud's eyes looked like he was realllllyyy tired and reallllyyyyy bored or something. And Barret asks some questions, guess what? STDs(lol) is the answer to the problem! And why does Vincent say the "We'll see about that" whlie only Cloud fights?
So to sum up-
+Storyline is great and not cliched
+The voice acting is okay, but can use some improvement
+VIncent was drawn really good-And cloud...well make him wear
-Intro too long, and quite boring
-Animation needs more work - specially the walking and fighting movements
-The music needs to fit more into the scene(so do, some don't)
-If you replay it, the ending music doesn't change(go away)-just cut it on the dot or fade it
If you want to see some examples, search wolfenstein and watch Axis and Allies(4/16) - It's characters move 2d-wise, but it should give you some idea on what to improve on! Just think of this as practice =)
Take your time, polish this up! 7/10
SiMpSoN-bRuVaS responds:
thanks for taking the time to write such a helpful review i agree with everything you say and will use this to improve remnant 2 which will be released shorltly ill just go back and work on the flaws in the flash =P im glad you liked the story though =PPP yea and vincent should have fought (everybody loves vincent xD)
not a fan
im not a fan of final fantasy at all so i couldnt get past the begining with the talking it was just too boring
SiMpSoN-bRuVaS responds:
sorry for boring you dude =PPP
sorry
not a big fan of final fantasy. but its good, like kingslime said voices can use work.
SiMpSoN-bRuVaS responds:
lol im glad you liked it and im definately going to improve on the voices for remnant 2
Great Prologue...
The animation and voices could use a little work, I never thought Vincent would sound so horse, but the story is a good idea. Keep it up. :)
SiMpSoN-bRuVaS responds:
ty for the review, maybe hell have a soother in the next one to help his poor throat =P