Great
It was very good. I do think you need to change the wizard's eyes though, make them have a little more than just black. Otherwise it was very good.
I agree with The-d00m regarding joe633, also to joe633, correct me if I'm wrong, but aren't those three elements you named very close to eachother, with numbers one and two being almost identical and number three just expanding upon the previous two?
Anyways, very good, and it should not have been longer.