Very good, but could have been better.
It was very smooth, nice idea, great art. But sadly lacking, no change in the end, and the landscape near his house was barren. You should have made him make more, a brick well, bushes, a brick/dirt path leading off the screen, a hill with flowers, ect. As you can probably see the ladnscape is quite empty. And the night part was weird that you just cut off half of the screen.
Though, what little you did have was surperb, and I can understand the feeling of working on something that you just wanna leave as it is and submit it. So I can give this no less than an 8/10
Nicely done.