Good stuff
I really like this flash. There really isnt anything to complain about from my end. It was visually stunning and a deep plot/storyline that has room to grow. 5/5 and 10/10 for you.
But if I were to point out where you could improve, I would point at the background music. There is nothing wrong with the actuall music or the quality of it, it is just that its does not change to fit the mood of the scene. I mean I would speed it up when fighting and slow it down or turn it off al together when there is a serious dialog playing. But that is just my suggestion, which is yours to take it how you wish.
Keep them coming I want a series.