Great Style
I thought that the style of this movie was great. The action sequences were exciting and fun to watch. However, this being the first chapter of the series, it would have been nice to get a little better idea of the back story.
Reviews for "DevilSlayer V-1"
JazLyte responds:
Thanks, I was trying to make a mysterious beginning, but I hope I didn't go overboard heh
Good and bad
First the good. The voices were done very well, and the plot, so far as I can see, shows definite promise. As well, the people were all very well drawn.
As for the bad. The camera angles almost never made any sense, the original fight scene was much to melodramatic, felt like I was watching anime. A pistol can neither fire that fast or for that long. A little more plot development would be good, but as this is the first episode you did well.
Over all, it shows promise but is way to cheesy for now.
Not bad
First of all I will say that the graphics were pretty good :) nad I could tell you put a lot of effort and work into the flash, however I felt a bit confused with the storyline, maybe you should work on that a little, half the time I didn't understand what was going on so that kinda spoiled it a bit for me. But all in all it was good :D Keep it up(but work on the stroyline)
JazLyte responds:
Thanks, but with all due respect, how am I gonna get people curious about the next one if I reveal everything from the beginning?
w00t!
Even though I'm as white as can be, I feel the need to say "Respect"! You made exactly what I wanted to see. Newgrounds need more voice casts like you. The acting in this is phenomenal, the story is original, and the art is awesome! Hope to see more. Peace.
JazLyte responds:
Whoa, thanks man! 'preciate it.
Not really too good
The first thing i noticed was what was with the characters? Honestly they really didn't fit well unless you were going for some kind of futuristic hood thing. Also the story was ok but it had a lot to be worked on before you release it. The last thing was how you did it i could barely tell what was going on half the time and for some one like me that is a very rare thing anyway improve this if not this episode then the next one.