Reviews for Project: Game Over Ep.1A

[DirgeSinger]

Front Page?

I really don't understand how this hit the front page, but I felt this submission was horrible.

From a plot viewpoint, this was really lacking. The storyline was too chaotic and immature (if a storyline can even come from a flash sprite animation). It wasn't a tasteful immature either...

The voice acting was HORRIBLE and there were a few times I actually winced from hearing it. Honestly, it sounded like a bunch of 13 year olds playing with action figures.

The pixel art that was done to design the main villain was pretty bad as well, as was his overall look.

I vote "0" on this submission, and a smack on the wrist to the staff for putting this front page.

I'm not trying to be mean, I just think you should try to be a little more grown up and professional in your submissions :)

-Dirge

[CrawlingKingSnake]

I agree with Mac88, it was really cheesy.

It obviously took some talent to make this, but it's not anything I'm interested in watching all the way through.

I almost shut it off in the middle of the fight scene, but decided to tough it out.

The voice acting for a couple characters was okay, but they all seemed to be the same person. There was no individuality between them.
Also, it felt like something I've seen 100 times before. It just seemed so cliched and played out that I could barely stand to finish it.

I won't be watching any of the future episodes.

[Mac88]

Cheesy, at best.

It's been stated before, and for the sake of not being TOO redundant, I'll summarize my thoughts on this:

1) Voice acting needs work, terribly so. Especially the Archaeologist' accent.

2) Try thinking up dialogue that would match each individual villain's character, instead of copying and pasting the same line several times and changing the odd preposition. Otherwise, it looks like a cheap rip off of dozens upon dozens of crap-animes out there on Cartoon Network.

3) If you're going to go DBZ, at least add something <i>new</i> for everyone to work with.

[hajs5]

My ears are bleeding

Good visuals bad sound especially that archaeologist.

[Diggadu]

two things...

1 You could make the lines a little bit less sloppy and then you would have a very good manuscript.
2 Meta-knight is not a bad guy the main villain in kirby is called nightmare and meta knight is helping kirby in many games to defeat him.