Butterscoth yo
JK, this is awesome. Respect
As a Fan of everyone from Five Finger Death Punch to Demon Hunter and beyond this is just awesome, I'd recommend adding another two verses or so, maybe something like:
They're working hard, they fight for you!
All against me, fighting through!
The horde is coming, coming for you!
To take you up and embrace you,
to tear you up in their collective!
But through the lies I see the truth!
(I'm not a lyricist at all)
Your vocals are top notch, and this goes right on the ipod.
When are you coming in concert near me ;)
Awesome track,
Omega