great
great work
Reviews for "Animal's student -ep01-"
I gave this submission a vote of "5"
I love Anime... and I love Murakami-kun!
Kono Bideo wa Hontouni Subarashi dane!
Gokurou!
Ganbate ne! ^_^
I could be wrong
Now i could be wrong which is why i'm giving this a rating as high as it is but. i am a big anime fan and i did notice the hallway in the beginning and the classroom look an awful lot like the Death Note series. Did you pull thoes pics directly from the series or were they drawn? Just a question. On a lighter note. The film was good. The overall animation was decent and narration was solid. However i did notice a problem with the sounds and ambient effects or lack there of that i would associate with this lvl of flash. I know this can be difficult but IMO some of the more subtle effects can make or break the flash. Overall decent maybe concentrate a little (i mean tiny) more on the not so main characteristics such as sounds and background ambiance. Other than that keep doing what your doing
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where to begin.. haha... ok lets start off with the good points ^^... well... firstly... some of the scenes were very well drawn.. to an extent of profesionallism which rivals corporate animations.. and by "well drawn".. i refer to scenes such as the panoramic view of the corridor outside the classrooms and the overhead view of the food tray... stuff like that... (mostly the backdrops).. lotsa effort put into drawing those... so good job on that.. umm then... animation was smooth at most parts.. such as the "vaulting horse" part... hmm... also the background audio.. fits well.. where it should.. ^^.. now... to some bad points.. ^^... voice acting... ^^... well... mainly... it isnt too bad... even the teacher's voice actor.. is plausible... however.. the mixing of the voices... wasnt done very well... in such that.. the voice thats supposed to be subject of attention.. is often drowned by the voices of the minor things.. such as the "chitter chatter in the background" and "the laughter of children".... if you get my point ^^... and while at the moment.. the plot seems.... cliche and stuff.... ill wait it out for a few more episodes before i review on that ^^.... anyhow.... great job none the less.. ^^... just... remember where to put the focus ^^.. thats all =).... oh well.. thats it i guess... take care... and hope to see another 1 soon ^^..
Wow.
Dude i totally love your art. The graphics are awesome and the story is very much creative. You really worked this thing out. Keep going.