Mixed Feelings
I am rating this 4/10 because even though the artstyle was nice, it isn't anything new or spectacular I am sure the auther put a lot of hard work into it but even with that it was bland at best.
As for the story behind the animation it was a bit too childish not the subject matter itself, it seemed as if a 5 year old wrote the script.
all in all my advice to the auther is "keep trying your off to a great start"
Maybe ep.2 may be better.