Totemo omoshiroi dayo!
I liked this. Considering the fact that I'm usually brutal to bad flash, I think that means more than just a little bit.
Good surprises, surprisingly good graphics for using but 3 colors, and great voice acting.
And, you speak Japanese. Not most people bother putting Nihongo into their flash, so that stood out at me. And, I know how to speak a little of it.
My voice actress is Japanese and likes to add some in there.
Nice but needs improvement.
I liked your art but there were a couple of problems;
1. Voice acting was honestly pretty bad.
2. The blood animation was bad.
3.Music was horrible sorry. If that is what type of music you are into thats fine but when submitting think of the wider audience.
Other than those i really liked the art and great effort put into it. Well done. I dont mean to sound mean im just offering critical feedback. thanks!
Nice artwork.
the art was pretty good , did you use a pen and wacom tablet? if so how does it work for you.
I think the only place you need to improve more upon is the blood. There is just either too much of it or not enough for detail, it looks like someone through a can of paint into scene, work on that and your stuff will be soldi.
Yes, I'm starting to use a Wacom tablet to draw in flash. It is certainly not as intuitive as pencil and paper but it's very useful.
My blood. I don't know. That's just how I did it. I thought the Mortal Kombat-esque gallons of blood was funny. But maybe how I render blood will evolve as I get more practice. Know of a good tutorial?
OH LOL'D
*see above comment*
Great Artwork
The best part of any episode fromt his series is definitely the artwork. Its fantastic. The animation is always kind of dodgy and cheap but I really couldn't care less because I simply love your artwork. Same with the plots, short, violent, then with terribly animated mono-colored blood. LOL But sometimes they are really good. This one was just, well, normal. But the art, man, love it. I could watch these all twice in a row just to enjoy your artwork. Art 10/10, Sound 5/10 its never good, everything else, 7-8/10. Cool stuff,
IEatBabies.