great concept
I really like the idea, but the graphics do need some work, which will just come with practice as you learn more about flash, so don't worry about that. The thing I really didn't like, and which prevented me from scoring you higher was the voices. The seem to be really loud and overly goofy, which I found a little annoying, to be honest. Maybe consider dropping those next time. Just trying to help. Anyway, good luck on this series.
Ok, thanks, I'll remember this while making P2 ^-^.
the idea is good,but needs improvement
it's not bad 4 a first flash. u should make a second but the sprites and clips need to be worked on but aside from that its not bad.
Thanx ^-^
Good Job!
I think it was well plotted out story-wise, but you may need to improve the graphic resolution a bit... But you do a good job!
Yea, ill fix that!
Good but too many flaws
The sprites are vary bad quality and the filesize is pretty large which made it too long of a wait for it to load. The story seemed to go too slow. It was porrly animated but with a little work, it could become much better.
It was my first flash, I didn't expect much from it.
:-(
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