your talented...
...but you need to put more fps in there and then make the edges smoother and fix some of the colors and thats it really. good job keep it up
your talented...
...but you need to put more fps in there and then make the edges smoother and fix some of the colors and thats it really. good job keep it up
Thats why Im puttin the fight scene in the next one goin at 18 fps
Plz read this
Allright your off to a good start but i think you need some help..Allright 1 u need better graphics lol 2 some of the talking was a little to fast for the watcher to see 3 you went into the story to fast not like many mario stories but unique is GOOD.
Yea, i've added a "Press Space to continue thing on the second part, so people can actually read it.
And I figured out how to make my sprites look better.
Pretty good...
But if you want to get to Alvin-Earthworm's level, you will have to do better. Like, for example, your backgrounds tended to jump when the screen moved. There are a few more problems with this flash, but don't be discouraged! This flash series has the potential to turn out to be a great series! All it needs is some smoother animations and that's it! Keep up the good work!
Thanks man, and don't worry! My animating skills are now up there with the other great animators... and P2 is coming along awesomely.
Good but...
Good as far as story line and general flash, but the sprites look like they were recorded by some kind of monitor camera, not just a normal flash thing.
its ok
The sprites seems a little... weird
also the story was pretty good
the sprie kept moving up and down but it was pretty good
Yea.. Ill fix this sprite jumping in P1...